Dear Manager,
I am writing this letter to report the loss of my valuable phone two days back. Since, I have taken the insurance from your company to bear the expenses of anything lost which clearly entitles me to claim the amount of that phone. Here is the brief description of it.
It was a two months old "I phone" which cost around eighty thousand. It was a black colour X-656 model and was bought from "Hare Krishna" the authorised dealer of I phones in Lajpat Nagar, New Delhi. I even have the purchase bill of it, if you want I can produce it too.
I went to Mumbai two days ago by "Mumbai Express" train and I can reminisce explicitly that it was kept in the back pocket of my pant. However, to my surprise after I deboard the train, my phone was missing from that pocket. Additionally, this incident has been reported in the Dadar Police station, Mumbai as well by me and they are indeed looking for it.
Lastly, I want you to co-ordinate with the concerned Police officer to find about the status of my case, if they succeed in finding it soon than I have no issue but if, it seems to be impossible than I would like you to fulfil all the formalities swiftly so that I can get the claim as soon as possible because I am in desperate need of a phone.
I hope you will take this matter seriously.
Yours sincerely,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Manager, I am writing this letter to report the l...
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Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...oss of my valuable phone two days back. Since, I have taken the insurance from your c...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'phone'
Suggestion: phone
...rishna' the authorised dealer of I phones in Lajpat Nagar, New Delhi. I even have...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, lastly, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 251.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49003984064 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56665248077 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613545816733 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.758239476 44.8134815571 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9166666667 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143035151977 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504930458268 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546898589477 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835701099672 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559538055145 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.