Many people think that important things in life are mostly work free or can’t be bought. Do u agree?
Lifestyle has undergone dramatic changes over a couple of decades. Presently, some masses ponder that most valuable things in life of human being are too priceless to be bought. Here, I would like to accord with given statement.
There are manifold points to ensure my point of view. Firstly, feelings like love, happiness, and friendships are certainly free of cost. To illustrate, people can not only get so pleasure but also deep affection from their beloved one’s that nobody can purchase from anywhere. Thus, number of emotions plays a paramount role in every human life that is not being sold. Moreover, it is well said that “health is wealth” which is beyond price for every individual.
Furthermore, we are also being gifted by many things in life which are free of cost. To elaborate, beautiful nature as well as refreshing greenery is the precious gift of god that makes us fall in love with its marvelous views. Hence, attractive surroundings with its alluring ambiance are god gifted and unable to buy.
On the contrary, it is considered that money is not god but not less than god. Therefore, ample of things we can purchase only with full pockets that make us delighted. What is more, rich people strongly believe that materials things give them happiness and satisfaction. As a result, money has a more valuable role in everyone life and even it can buy treasure of happiness by fulfilling their needs and demands.
To recapitulate, I think money is one of the most important things that we need to live comfortably. But I firmly believe that feelings such as love trust and more are more precious that are free.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, i think, such as, as a result, as well as, on the contrary, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93906810036 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68715870984 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584229390681 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9401489658 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.0588235294 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4117647059 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41176470588 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289355380059 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748288405998 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080108574143 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141073203127 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273882151506 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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