Many parents believe that children should play team sports like football, basketball and so on, instead of individual sport such as swimming or running during the school scheduled timetable. Does u agree?
Sports play a magnificent role to uplift the standard of health, wealth and relationship. Without sports, a life is anticipated to be monotonous. Presently, some masses ponder that youngsters should participate in games such as football, basketball and many more. While, others assert that children should play individual games such as swimming and running. I would like to accord with former statement.
There are manifold points to ensure the benefits of teammate’s games. Firstly, team sports lead a great way to develop relationships. To elaborate, children who play games in team not only get chance to do friendship with other children but also to expand social skills which is worthwhile for them. Thus, build friendships as well as being social are excellent rewards offered by such sports.
Furthermore, participating in a team sport can increase one’s self esteem. To explain, by being a part of team, you will give and receive praise and that boost self esteem as you get known for your effort. Finally, high self esteem underpins every positive experience in your life.
On the contrary, it seems that individual sports have a higher competitive level. To illustrate, people who enjoy this sort of games train themselves to fight on their own and get all credit themselves if they win. Thus, the feeling of “I am the best” is always thrilling and desire in every child. Finally, games such as swimming and running have to compete at their own pace as they don’t have pressure to catch up with others.
To recapitulate, individual sports have plethora of merits, but I do believe that team sports are more beneficial to socialize and succeed.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, thus, well, while, sort of, such as, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18613138686 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83325706972 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620437956204 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4220651936 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5882352941 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1176470588 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250312609663 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748556593645 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703014766573 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142207268936 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779714439154 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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