Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nobody doubts that the world change a lot from the past, and the world faced a extreme evolution which has myriad of aspects. There are some people think that due to quick changes in the world they become less happy or satisfied with their lives. However, from my point of view I believe that these changes make our lives much easier, and happier than the past for different reasons, and my view will be analyzed in this essay for further explanation.
To begin with, it is no exaggeration to say that nowadays, because of technical and the huge advancement in all the life field, it is true that the life it is change but for the best. On the one hand, presence of the internet connection all the time with low cost which has a great impact on our lives. And the vivid example when we want to talk with our relatives that live far away from us, we use the internet and within few seconds you can talk with them face to face. Indeed, I will feel more happy than waiting at least a month or more to send my letter.
Secondly, what the modern technology offered to us. it is very comfortable to move freely without any complication or worrying to time, distance, and effort. For instance, the transportation system nowadays is easier than the past, and there are variety of methods like privet cars, buses, or plan and all of these methods make the life simpler and empower the sense of happiness and satisfaction.
All in all, I think my opinion is strong and solid enough to clarify all the previous reasons, and I believe due to this advancement the world become more awesome, and we cannot hide all this improvement and look from narrow angle, we should create and look to live the happiness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... lot from the past, and the world faced a extreme evolution which has myriad of a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, at least, for instance, i think, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 308.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53246753247 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37751030218 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558441558442 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.6738749522 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.909090909 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 5.45110844103 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175559104384 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673271531308 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087332609263 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959883457933 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787414408714 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.1575268817 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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