Culture shock is a new worrying concern for few immigrants. What are the possible options to eradicate this issue?
In this day and age, culture shock of some immigrants has become a debatabale issue among people from all walks of life all around the world. There are some solutions to tackle this problem. I am inclined to strongly believe that this problem can be eradicated by immigrants.
To begin with, there are a number of ways to deal with culture shock. First and foremost is that immigrants can get involved in physical activities. From my personal experience, I joined a club, when I immigrated to Australia. Consequently, it is quite clear that homesickness can be solved by recreational activities.
However, there is no doubt that immigration can lead to feeling a sense of frustration and isolation. Despite this possibility, it is occasionally argued that making new friends, learning about the history and language of a host nation can assist immigrants. By way of example, a recent academic research conducted by Oxford university researchers in 2012 has shown that depression and homesickness is related to immigration. Thus, it is quite conspicuous that good friens can help depressed immigrants to deal with their homesickness.
To put it in a nutshell, there are various options to eradicate culture shock such as making new friends, getting knowledge about a host country, recreational activities, and so forth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, so, thus, no doubt, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 213.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21596244131 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11231135317 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605633802817 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2559759981 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5833333333 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183527801408 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605267374712 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658969715531 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117466923265 0.151781067708 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693742398586 0.0609392437508 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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