Do you disagree or disagree with this following statement?
It is better knowledge to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to be specialized in one specific subject use specific readons and examples to support your answer
Thousands years ago when human had not obtained knowledge as much as taday, there was approximately no boundary between science , philosophy, art and etc. the most prominet scientists and philosophers of ancient history such as socrates , aristotle and plato were epecialized on numerous fields incuding of astronomy , physics , phlosophy and so on but over the time the human's horizon has been broadened and knowledge has been divided into plenty of branches as counting them almost seems impossibe .consequently , I firmly believe concentraiting on one subjects would be more sufficient in today's progressive world while others hold an opposite view . In the following paragraphs I will vidicate my point of view throgh some reasons .
First of all , dominating a particular field of study plays an important role in people 's academic prosperity and finding more privileged job's opportunities , however individuals are required to elevate their social and personal skills for a more satisfied life . for example : learning of other languages , playing musical instruments or reading book about different affairs could be opted by them as their next prorities . Not being rolling stone makes persons situations to benefit from their whole mind and tallent in that as result they be able to build a name for theirselves very soon they be known as an expert in that arena. Finally ,whether they are pursuing to be hired or academic success, having this bright resume put greater options infront them.
Second, becoming prificient is beneficial not only for individuals but also for development of society and human knowledge . When each individual atempt to be the best in his own field is aware of all corner of a certain affair therefore he makes less mistake and find the most creative way which consumes less money and time for resolving or promoting it . as result society wont get involved in financial crisises and will have more delighted people who are not concerned about facing with inflation. In addition by occupying on one branch of science , art and etc for years a person will come out with some new hypothesis, for example conversant socialogists who had been engaged in assessting human behavior over most part of their life ,finally were who constructed modern society which fighted against old traditions and that lead to more free human communities also science's discoveries are belong to ones who allocate their whole potential on solving just one matter.
Based on these defenses ,i put in proposal that society have to step toward trainig persons who are patient enough to accomplish their duty faultlessly in order to gaining pecuniary supplies in economy and also unraveling difficulties in front of science ,philosophy and so on,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2305.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 442.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2149321267 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81408862551 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 282.0 212.727598566 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638009049774 0.524837075471 122% => OK
syllable_count: 728.1 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.1344086022 179% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.783706483 48.9658058833 263% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 192.083333333 100.406767564 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.8333333333 20.6045352989 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 5.45110844103 200% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 45.0 5.5376344086 813% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110545962225 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408176518142 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0214735727317 0.0737576698707 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0605827515182 0.150856017488 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272957781324 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 11.7677419355 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 58.1214874552 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.1575268817 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.01818996416 128% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 86.8835125448 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 10.002688172 295% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.0537634409 163% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 10.247311828 293% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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