Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In recent time, there are a lot of criteria have been changed due to vast advancement, also because the world like a dynamic body. However, it has been argued that some people claim that the youngsters do not give enough time to help their communities. On the other hand, other people said nowadays juveniles have time and they do helpful activities toward their communities. From my point of view I definitely agree with the latter for many reasons. To substantiate my case, this essay will illustrate my opinion to elaborate my preference.
To begin with, this stage from the humankind life start from the 18 years old until the 60 years old, and this classification approved from the world health organization. Furthermore,they indicate that the most effective stage is this period, and they are able to do a lot of activities which help myriad of sectors in the community. So the first and the foremost point that come to the mind is, the young adult simply they have the physical fitness and power to do a lot of tasks. In other words, they are free from the chronic diseases that struggle their movement.
In addition, the second vital point that should be taken into consideration, helping the community has been very important specially for the young people, because they are interested to improve their country to reach the highest rang of improvement. For example, in my school there is one course talk about the community health, and how to enhance the community status. Also, we made a lot of open days that help to promote or prevent different diseases.
All in all, while some people think that young adult do not care about the communities improvement, I believe that this segment are responsible to help and enhance their communities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, while, for example, in addition, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 299.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88294314381 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69125428612 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9230769231 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.307692308 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 5.45110844103 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217100343656 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816747760737 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908630548993 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130698713409 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748419099627 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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