Future of the whole community is in hands of its young representatives. This statement disagrees with the opinion that youth does not spend sufficient time to helping communities. In my estimation, young people are the most active members of their districts. This can be proved by their participation in political protests, volunteer activities and environmental initiatives.
To start with, youth constitutes the majority of almost every group that protests for human rights. Young people consciously participate in civic parades and try to build a dialogue with local authorities. For example, I have recently participated in the protest for gender equality. With posters, I stood near the building of Parliament and demanded the government to increase female quota in Parliament. It confirms the fact that young people actively stand for the interests of their communities.
The next argument deals with the engagement of young people into volunteering. Many students organize free events for children, grown-ups and pensioners. For instance, I with my friend founded English Speaking Club for students and grown-ups. There we taught English on a volunteer basis and for free. During club’s functioning, we had more than seventy visitors. Therefore, young people like me are actively involved into volunteering for the sake of their local communities.
The last reason is that youth takes an active part in environmental initiatives. Every community benefits from the reduced amount of trash in the streets and cleaned parks. To illustrate that, I can give example from my own life, when at high school our class cleaned the whole central park. Our teachers organized us and gave necessary equipment, motivating us by high grades. In this way, we helped to clean our town and significantly improved its environmental conditions.
In the final analysis, young people play a crucial role in helping their districts. If they did not stand for human rights and freedoms, neither engaged in volunteering nor participated in environmental initiatives, the quality of life in their local communities would be much worse.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1806.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47272727273 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08185840682 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593939393939 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.348772329 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.0909090909 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.68181818182 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190136408838 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058396445499 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576577711406 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108768630231 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414753340035 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.85 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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