Illiterate of the 21st century will not be those who cannot read and write, but those who cannot learn, unlearn and relearn. To what extent do you agree or disagree
In the 21st century the illiterate has become long-running dispute among public all around the world, which leads to a moot question " what is the criteria of illiteracy?''. is a widely held the view that how governments should solve this problem, while I tend to believe that the solution requires both legal actions of higher authorities and individual decision.
To begin with, there are several reasons why I believe that authorities should eradicate the illiteracy. First and foremost is that the main cause of most social problems globally lies in lack of knowledge of the individuals. It is argued that in the modern world people should learn how to deal with new and sophisticated technology which must of the work today are connected to these technologies. Therefore, there is no doubt that governments should raise public awarenesses to encourage people to update themselves with the modern era.
Furthermore, needless to say, that the ability of reading and writing is not sufficient abilities for young people who are looking for the better job opportunity. For example, a group of profound social scientists working in a prestigious university conducted a longitudinal study among different countries to find the relationship between the level of education and the developed countries as well as health care. The result was positively correlated with not only by learning new and modern education but also better job opportunity.
To recapitulate, I highly believe that reading and writing are not enough ability in this centuries and authorities are recommended to provide people with modern education, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect
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| 2017-12-04 | Amir NIkzad | 67 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Is
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, well, while, for example, no doubt, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35094339623 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97932593962 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588679245283 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.1341334247 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.8 104.977214359 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.9669160288 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 7.25397266985 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0818978101918 0.242375264174 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0300552767341 0.0925447433944 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370785831718 0.071462118173 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0504782672855 0.151781067708 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022671883347 0.0609392437508 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 53.1260098522 69% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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