Nowadays, euthanasia or assisted suicide has become a long-running dispute among public all around the world, which leads to a moot question " is euthanasia acceptable action or not in modern society?". It is a widely held a view that this is highly beneficial action in medical centre, whereas I tend to believe that one must carefully weigh up the pros and cons of it.
To begin with, there are several reasons that I support euthanasia should be announced as a legal action in hospitals. First and foremost is that a large number of people who suffer from the chronic and incurable diseases for a long time should find an appropriate way to alleviate them from this terrible condition. In addition, numerous individuals are not able to pay the expensive bills that hospitals give them as a result of treating their families who are in the bed in so hospitals. Therefore, there is little room doubt that governments are recommended to provide sick people a happy death.
On the other hand, needless to say, that the main role of doctors and nurses in the medical center is to do their best to cure patients, so it is an immoral manner to help them assisted suicide. Furthermore, sickness is a part of one's life and help them to die is a behaviour like killing or murder. Thus, no one knows what the feature hold, so a patient who suffer in an irreversible coma maybe back to the life.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that the importance of euthanasia should be considered. However, as every garden may have some weed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Line 2, column 146, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...n hospitals. First and foremost is that a large number of people who suffer from the chronic and ...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ide. Furthermore, sickness is a part of ones life and help them to die is a behaviou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, whereas, in addition, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73134328358 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77064739152 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611940298507 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8803490294 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.272727273 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4545454545 7.25397266985 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123385818417 0.242375264174 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372718791321 0.0925447433944 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627967955638 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0691993332868 0.151781067708 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708776760266 0.0609392437508 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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