Deforestation is a major threat to the every living organisms in the globe including humans, even though we realized this fact very lately. Forests are the blood of every life pattern living on the earth, absence of these vital life support will result in total disappearance of the world currently we know.
First and foremost, these so called woodlands provides the most important life support content oxygen. The availability of oxygen in the atmosphere makes our planet unique as compared to others. Also the trees absorb the harmful carbon dioxide making the air more clear to breath. Moreover, these jungles we know are home to thousands of wild animals and unique vegetation's. They need their natural habitat to survive on this earth, otherwise they will disappear from the face of the forever. For instance, The animals like tasmanian tigers are become extinct because of the same reason
Secondly, trees are the one's who controls the climate, when there are more forest land, then there will be more rain and water resources. This is the reason why reason why nowadays we are facing the water scarcity problem. Furthermore, absence of forests make the effects of global warming more severe when there is not enough trees to absorb the sheer amount manmade CO2 content in the air. Last but not least, these sapling act as nature barrier for soil erosion problem, there roots actually act as fence against this.
To recapitulate, almost every life on the earth is depends up on these woodlands fro survival. They are playing an inevitable part in the future of our planet. Currently we almost lost two third of the worlds total forest, so we need act fast to protect that is remaining of it for ensuring the future of our earth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Also,
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Suggestion: reason why
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...trees to absorb the sheer amount manmade CO2 content in the air. Last but not lea...
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Message: Did you mean 'for'?
Suggestion: for
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91525423729 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39940622742 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589830508475 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2209780303 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.571428571 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170630752109 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533786891366 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733705953046 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111508150174 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580908803365 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.