The given bar chart provides estimated oil production capacity of 6 major oil producing countries during for a period of 20 years.
It clearly evident from the chart that Saudi Arabia is the largest player in the market during the entire period with 8 million barrels per day during 1990 which is almost 3 fold of all the other oil producing nations. This trend continued through out the years of 2000, 2005 as 9 million and 13 million barrels respectively . In 2005 it reached a staggering figure of 15 million barrel per day out numbering all the other nations.
The other three nations Iran, Iraq, Kuwait and UAE showed almost the same figures during the year of 1990 and produced approximately 2 million barrels per day each. Iran's production capacity was almost steady during the years of 2000, 2005 and 2010 as 4 million barrels but other 3 country's figures were in between 2 and 4 billion barrels.
Whereas Qatar figure were very low as compared to other oil producers, in all the years of 1990 to 2005 figures hardly touched the point of 1 million barrel per day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...producing nations. This trend continued through out the years of 2000, 2005 as 9 million an...
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...lion and 13 million barrels respectively . In 2005 it reached a staggering figure ...
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...els but other 3 countrys figures were in between 2 and 4 billion barrels. Whe...
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...ther 3 countrys figures were in between 2 and 4 billion barrels. Whereas Qata...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71428571429 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40445684977 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550264550265 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.9058985233 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.285714286 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.71428571429 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00995848986944 0.215688989381 5% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00670514072015 0.103423049105 6% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0106291629981 0.0843802449381 13% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00804426457451 0.15604864568 5% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00907887517528 0.0819641961636 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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