Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People have been arguing whether or not youth`s opinions matter. Personally, I think that young people are important members of the society and they significantly affect life in the world. There are a few reasons why I hold this stance.
First of all, youth is knowledgeable in technology. These days, almost every business setting equipped with computers and machines, and people who are able to operate them easily are the most valuable employees. My niece`s experience is a compelling example of this. My niece is going to become a doctor when she graduates the high school, but for now, she is working for a company, which elaborates and maintains Internet websites. Although the girl is only fifteen years old, she is a well-respected employee because she is a seasoned computer user and knows a lot about them. Therefore, when it comes to the development of a new website, her manager is always interested in her ideas and thoughts on the project, such as how to make the product attractive for public or what kind of innovations and features she can suggest. To that end, today, millennials are considerable members of companies they work for.
Secondly, the young portion of the population is energized, which makes them actively participate in the political, economic, and social life of the places they live in. In many parts of the modern world, people who reached eighteen years old can take part in presidential elections, and in this way, they can have a great impact on the future political course of their countries. Moreover, juveniles very often create a different kind of clubs and organizations to support their communities. For instance, when I was in a college, I was a member of a students` association, which helped families with the low incomes to survive. Every week, my pears and I gathered to craft nice things to decorate houses. Money, we had from selling the crafts, the club donated to children in need. We bought them clothes, food, and toys. By doing this, we contributed to the happiness of these kids. This example is a great illustration of how young generation can change lives.
To conclude, I strongly believe that juveniles influence life on the planet. This is because they are technologically advanced, and have a voice and desire to make changes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
People have been arguing whether or not youth's opinions matter. Personall...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e a few reasons why I hold this stance. First of all, youth is knowledgeable in ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ave a voice and desire to make changes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, i think, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1925.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98704663212 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91350356908 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598445595855 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5649198457 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6666666667 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.380952381 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61904761905 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11556626042 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0322805388099 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315878617811 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0782407311165 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440847348915 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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