There are significant decisions that affect the shape of the future of a society. I believe there are some people who have the power, richness or webs to determine these conditions and in my view I do not think that young people has an effect on making important decisions for the future of a society. I will explain my reasons in this essay.
Initially, today young people are easy to manipulate thus, if an organization want to impress them, all they have to do is to publish sided news and find impressive reasons or maybe lies. Since many young people stop reading and searching, they could believe or support or refuse any idea by manipulation. Moreover, they could accept any notion simply if it is okay for their benefits. The main reason of this situation is that the young people start to be self centered and careless. This so called developing and respectful world is made people ruthless and blind. Hence, the decisions made without real consideration creates unwanted results however, these results can be irreversible sometimes.
Secondly, there are some decisions that were made without asking for permissions or toughts. These undercovered decisions can be made because of the power of a person or an organization. This power can be very dangerous and irresistable hence, we can be sentenced to obligate these rules by force and young people do not even realize about the issue.
Third, there are some influencers who has a great impression on many youngs. These influencers gain the trust and sympathy in youngs and when the time comes they share some ideas as if those were their ideas. However, these are only actions that made to impress youngs and rule them.
In a nutshell, I do not think that todays young people have an influence on the future of society since they are roled as puppets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thus, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86495176849 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61038199256 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520900321543 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1649753681 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5625 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22457701182 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761482424363 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683864429707 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149104029985 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777772653368 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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