The diagram depicts proportion of water used in different parts of the world, which is North America, South America, Europe, Africa, Central Asia and Both East Asia. The mentioned parameters are Industrial use, agricultural use and domestic use.
It is clear form the chart that most of the parts, water is used for agricultural purpose. Especially in areas like South America, Africa and Asian regions. Detailed view of the Asian regions reveals that, Central Asia and South East Asia uses more than two third of the water for farming purpose 81% and 88% respectively. African region also fooling the same trend with 84% agricultural water consumption.
North America and Europe showed a completely different consumption pattern. They used almost half of the water for industrial use 48% and 53% respectively. Domestic consumption is accounted for least proportion in these regions 13% in North America and 15% in Europe. where as in Africa and Asian regions less than 10% of water was consumed for domestic purpose followed by indusrial use. A noted feature is that the South America's consumption pattern, they used 71% of their water for farming purpose, 19% for domestic use and 10% industrial use.
In conclusion the regions like South America, Africa and asian regions gave much importance to agricultural sector. while, areas like North America and Europe focused on Industrial development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, third, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28125 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68709581085 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522321428571 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 283.868780488 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7438641299 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198989897354 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086239995504 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517304137879 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124258038218 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637512077289 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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