Currently, we can see a lot of people are migrating to other countries for better employment and living conditions, especially to english speaking countries. Once the migration process is completed, many of the immigrants finding it difficult to adjust to host country's culture. Some people say that migrants should adopt the local culture while others say that they can adapt an environment by creating minor community.
First of all, when we shift to another country, we should respect their culture. No matter what, we are always outsiders, so in-order to blend in we should go with the flow. Secondly, every country has their own culture and ethnicity that the natives are proud of, hence the immigrants should show the same compassion towards the same. Lastly, people are moving to other developed countries realising fact that they offer good standard of living and other benefits, therefor to avail all this, new comers should transform their life according to host conditions.
On the contrary, some migrants are interested in creating their own community within the host country. Some countries have liberal laws that allows other people to follow their own culture and traditions. Moreover, moving to another country does not mean that we are completely forgetting our roots and starting a new one from ground zero, no one can do that. Their is no point in showing respect to other cultures if we are not respecting our past. Furthermore, every cultures teach us good things, so their is no need to completely abandon our roots. We can follow host country's culture by giving equal importance to our past, there is nothing wrong with that.
To conclude, migration is a global phenomenon and it will continue in the future also. There will be some problems when people move to a completely different environment that they are totally unaware of, but the success of solving these problems relies on how they deal with this issues sensibly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 361, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: There
...e from ground zero, no one can do that. Their is no point in showing respect to other...
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Line 5, column 504, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...every cultures teach us good things, so their is no need to completely abandon our ro...
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Line 7, column 82, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...enon and it will continue in the future also. There will be some problems when peopl...
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Line 7, column 276, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...e problems relies on how they deal with this issues sensibly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08074534161 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57650203134 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55900621118 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4554177673 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.066666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219525861795 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728908383987 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717375762482 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138004387569 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534552535546 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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