You recently receive a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to the college or to try to get a job. YOu think she should get the job
- say why she would not enjoy going to college
- explain why getting a job is a good idea for her
- suggest types of job that would be suitable for her
Dear Sara,
I hope you are well and sorry that I haven’t written for ages. I was busy working and studying and I couldn’t spare a minute for myself.
As you know I have started to study in Alf University just after finishing the high school and consequently I couldn’t get any job experience in my field which caused me some difficulties. I believe that it would be much better for you to work for a while and after that you will have the chance to continue your education.
By getting an appropriate job you will learn some interpersonal skills such as delegating a task or working in a team that are valuable qualifications for an employee. Furthermore, it will open doors for better job opportunities in the future.
I would suggest you to find a full time job in a café. It makes sense since there isn’t any other café in your neighborhood and in less than 2 years after getting qualified, you can run your own cafe and I am sure that you will make a success out of it.
I hope you can make the best decision.
Best wishes,
Rahi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 31, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...uture. I would suggest you to find a full time job in a café. It makes sense since the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, so, well, while, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60103626943 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86070429977 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60103626943 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4404516319 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 4.34317383033 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238102882443 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963444271416 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506025138656 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13042274075 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518032931281 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.