Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are various jobs each of which involves workers with different tasks. Generally workers are more satisfied when they do different works during the job than when just do similar tasks all the day long because not only does it make them a less boring job, but also it increases their experiences and talents in different fields.
The first reason that can be stated here is that doing different tasks during the workday is some kind of variety for workers. Do various activities, workers become less boring, while if they do all days a repetitive work, they will be exhausted and bored, so when workers do various activities, they will be more satisfied. For example, consider a building designer who designs structures in office. If he just sits at the computer all the days and design, after a while he will be tired then his energy will decline. On the contrary, if he sometimes acts as supervisor in building workplace, it would be a variety for him. He sometimes designs on the office and sometimes works in building workplace.
The second point that deserves some words here is that when employees do different tasks on the job, they can enhance their ability and experiences. Consider a worker that do a specific work every day. There is nothing new for him, but if try various activities in his job, he can get more experiences in different fields related to his job. Getting more experts in the job would definitely satisfy workers because they found their time more useful. For instance, consider the designer. If he works all days on the computer on the design of structures, he will be professional on one field; while, if he works on workplace beside of his designing, he can attain experience on both design and structural supervisor, so he learns more and he would be happier about that.
To summarize, workers prefer to have various activities in their workplace. It makes a less boring job for them, and it will help them to increase their abilities and experiences in more fields. Who do you think to prefer to do one task in his job?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, while, for example, for instance, kind of, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74373259053 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57378299488 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470752089136 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 530.1 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.8741005825 48.9658058833 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.176470588 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1176470588 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76470588235 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313654820617 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110457806315 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11817771887 0.0737576698707 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225851699291 0.150856017488 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924631355657 0.0645574589148 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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