Your car is hired from a company and while you were driving on holiday, you had a small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it.
You need to explain the following:
• when and where you hired it
• describe how the accident happened
• what kind of action did you take after the accident
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you about the accident that happened to me while I was driving on Abc Street, Charlestown.
My name is Rahi Honarvar and I hired a BMW from the main branch of your company that is located in the Main Road Street, on 27th of November for the duration of 5 days.
Unfortunately, I had an accident while I was driving to the suburbia yesterday. I was in my way that suddenly a car smashed my car and it damaged the back of the car. Although the damage is not too much, there are some visibe scratches on the back of the car.
Since I did not know about the rules and conditions of this state I waited until the police arrived and provided a report for the insurance company as well as your company. This report is available at the police station and you can check it in case of any need for investigation. I will arrange to take back the car to the company tomorrow.
Sorry for the recent events and I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Rahi Honarvar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36458333333 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4736238809 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567708333333 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8387956039 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277577114277 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095707059787 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503167546631 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140923499331 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04497489231 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.