The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002

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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002

The given table illustrates the percentage of consumer spending on disparate items in five different countries in 2002. Overall, food/drinks/tobacco was a highest numbers of particulars in all countries. However, Turkey’s data was also the highest in all items, except clothing/footwear.
Turkey’s data was the highest among all nations in food/drinks/tobacco and leisure/education with 32.14 per cent and 4.35 per cent sequentially, while the Italy’s number was highest in clothing/footwear with 9.00 %. The food/drinks/tobacco’s data of Italy, Spain and Sweden was similar with around 17.00 per cent.
However, leisure/education item was lower than other two data with about 3.00% and leisure/education of Spain’s number was the lowest.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 154, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... 2002. Overall, food/drinks/tobacco was a highest numbers of particulars in all c...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 660.0 965.302439024 68% => OK
No of words: 107.0 196.424390244 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.16822429907 4.92477711251 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2162214527 3.73543355544 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.55589429635 2.65546596893 172% => OK
Unique words: 65.0 106.607317073 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607476635514 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 183.6 283.868780488 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.1109828071 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105924944336 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959777143852 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.202659688838 0.0843802449381 240% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955032968038 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116309762046 0.0819641961636 142% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.21 11.4140731707 160% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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