Some people say that in order to be happy, you must have a job you love doing. Other say that other factors are more important.
Do you think that people can only be happy if they have a job they really enjoy?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Many people, nowadays, spent most of their time at job, between 40 to 50 hours a week, therefore they consider having satisfied job is enough to be happy person. However, in my opinion, job is not everything in our life and it is absolutely not enough to be happy even if we enjoy it. I will give two reasons for my opinion in this essay.
On the first hand, nobody can argue the importance of doing something you love in your job.
Spending workday interested in what you are doing results in satisfy feeling and creative working.
But that do not mean you are happy person in your life because other life issues have great reflection on every one feeling and happiness. For example, having family and kids gives human life valuable meaning and reduce work stressful even without completely enjoyable job. Therefor, family, kids and friends play a significant role in our joyful and happiness more than what job can do.
On the other hand, work is not everything in human life even that he spent in average 30-40 years at job, but at last these years will over whatever he had good or bad job, and then only family and friends could surround him with loveliness and careful. Thu, if anybody, for instance, considers happiness at job is enough for whole life and never mind about his personal life, he will finally spend his retired years alone without care of love and without happy as well.
In conclusion, family, friends and happy personal life are more important to have happy life in general
rather than have a joyful job only.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6875 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2928888819 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580882352941 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7442674245 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.909090909 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3636363636 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285666132459 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121126955635 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432988253216 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145959092971 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563832480753 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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