Nowadays the world is facing many environmental problems, majority of them are as a result of manmade activities. One of the important such issues that need an immediate attention is that the disappearance of nature flora and fauna. Many of the species are extinct from the face of the earth till now as a result of humans greedy nature. However, still some people believe that too much importance and rescues are dedicated to the protection of wild life and birds. I completely disagree with this statement because the following reasons.
To begin with, increasing number of deforestation and pollution issues are the clear sign that, people are not much cared about their nature. World is still waiting for some catastrophic effects to act up on. For instance, according to the recent WWF studies almost 20% of the annals are disappeared from our earth over these period of time, and an additional 15% in verge of exinction. Despite of the efforts of many NGO's and wild life protectors, the number endangered specious are kept increasing. Furthermore, currently governments are spending much of their money economic development and industrial growth rather the sustainable growth plans.
Similarly, protection and reinstating the habitats of such animals cost huge pile of money and effort. It is not easy to replicate something that is provided by the mother nature. This is the main hurdle that many countries face, when they try to act up on. Only financially viable countries can withstand the long term expenses incurring in maintaining such reserves. On top of that, scarcity of proper resources is the another barrier that many animal welfare authorities are experiencing like availability of proper land and environment.
To recapitulate, It has been evident from the reasons stated above, there is a clear lack of attention regarding the protection wild life and it's habitat. The world should take an immediate steps regarding this issue before the matters goes out of hands.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 327, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...e disappeared from our earth over these period of time, and an additional 15% in verge of exin...
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Line 7, column 191, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'step'?
Suggestion: step
...tat. The world should take an immediate steps regarding this issue before the matters...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, regarding, similarly, so, still, for instance, as a result, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17956656347 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83577811405 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597523219814 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6654426247 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4117647059 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235114700496 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621046163725 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672074895054 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125846920394 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641845827204 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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