Environmental problems are too great to be managed by individuals so real change can only be achieved at government level.'
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience.
Nowadays, the question of who is responsible to manage the environmental problems has becoma a long-running dispute among the public all around the world. It is held the view that the government must be held responsible for the problems mentioned above, while I tend to believe that solution requires both legal actions of higher authorities and individual decision.
To begin with, there is little room doubt that governments play a pivotal role to solve the environmental problems. First and foremost is that one of the most important issue which leads to climate change is using car by fossil fuels. That is to say, governments should provide people environmentally friendly and green energy for people to use in their car and replace fossil fuel by these source of renewable energy. In addition, authorities should provide people with better and eassy acsses public transport system to reduce traffic jam inner cities.
On the other hand, needless to say that all actions mentioned above which nations should to do that, can not lonely solve the environmental problem and people should help their governments. Firstly, people should use less private cars in streets and use other means of transportation such as bycicle and electric motorcycles. Secondly, heavy industries have to produce less rubbish and chemical materrials which leads to environmental problems.
To recapitulate, I entirely believe that the local authorities are recommended to enforce some strict legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect and preserve our envitonment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...e the environmental problems has becoma a long-running dispute among the public all around the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, while, in addition, such as, to begin with, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44081632653 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96123503845 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620408163265 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7280866159 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.3 104.977214359 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.25397266985 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119390471728 0.242375264174 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457082410718 0.0925447433944 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325724445551 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0653985988281 0.151781067708 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361198165513 0.0609392437508 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 12.6369458128 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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