Nowadays, the discounts of prices in big companies have become a long-running dispute among the public all around the world, which leads to a moot question " is there any advantages in it or not?". It is a widely held the view that offer is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must carefully weigh up the pros and cons of it.
To begin with, there are several reasons why I believe that the big companies should provide costumers with appropriate discounts. First and foremost is that these brand are able to sell their outfits that were not able to absorb people's attention, so with a good offer they would gain more money to provide new collections for customers. In addition, an attractive discount for a less famous brand can gain more individuals attention and this could be the best advertisement for that brand.
However, there is little room doubt that many factories provide offers to cheat buyers. That is to say, stories merely give the offer for that stuff that is out- of- date and old. For example, a group of reputable social activist, working in a prestigious university, conducted a longitudinal study of two brands which provide the offer for costumers on other not. Therefore, the result was statistically significant and revealed that those who give discounts was three times provide less quality stuff.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that, although there are some advantages on discounts I prefer to purchase the brands that have good quality and prices not just for offers. However, every garden have some weed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... of prices in big companies have become a long-running dispute among the public all around the...
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Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...t for a less famous brand can gain more individuals attention and this could be the best ad...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, for example, in addition, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 5.94088669951 269% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98859315589 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68649947275 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608365019011 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5864777934 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.272727273 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178182842373 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606522436161 0.0925447433944 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438664841868 0.071462118173 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0908940195991 0.151781067708 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591993544761 0.0609392437508 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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