Involvement of youth in crimes is increasing at an alarming rate. Throw some light on the causes and possible solutions.
Illegal activities like robbery, murders are the significant problems which faced by society in this era. After providing a careful analysis of why youth are encouraged to participate in domestic violence, based on that, I can suggest number of ways to resolve this issue.
There are various reasons to raise the violence, and first one is unemployment, as many young graduates restore to looting and stealing valuable items to meet their daily needs. At the same time lack of opportunities to survive is another great cause of frustration among young people, for instance, Somalia job market is...
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- Involvement of youth in crimes is increasing at an alarming rate Throw some light on the causes and possible solutions 82
- Involvement of youth in crimes is increasing at an alarming rate. Throw some light on the causes and possible solutions? 11
- Involvement of youth in crimes is increasing at an alarming rate. Throw some light on the causes and possible solutions?: Involvement of youth in crimes is increasing at an alarming rate. Throw some light on the causes and possible solutions? 11
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Sometimes the e-grader has
Sorry, sometimes the e-grader has issues because the essay topic has less connections with the essay content. But the essay is still right on the topic. see the final score below.
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 15
No. of Words: 259 350
No. of Characters: 1334 1500
No. of Different Words: 170 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.012 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.151 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.875 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 97 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 77 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 57 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 38 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.9 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.833 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.343 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.618 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.056 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ir daily needs. At the same time lack of opportunities to survive is another grea...
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Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mong young people, for instance, Somalia job market is dull, so most of Somalians...
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Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ull, so most of Somalians are encouraged to commit crimes. The lack of parental s...
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Line 3, column 500, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and values and this could be one of the reason for increasing violence. On th...
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Line 5, column 260, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to criminal activities. Secondly, having good family bonding and providing a frie...
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Line 5, column 337, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... friendly atmosphere for the children by loving, caring for and supporting them ...
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Line 5, column 346, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... atmosphere for the children by loving, caring for and supporting them is pretty...
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Line 5, column 428, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... much required for the young generations.. Thirdly its our social responsibility t...
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Line 5, column 439, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...red for the young generations.. Thirdly its our social responsibility to create awa...
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Line 7, column 46, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... analyzing all the points I can say that , we must be responsible for this phenome...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29343629344 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95771731509 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65250965251 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.3574660732 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.1 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.052959153859 0.244688304435 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.017947072097 0.084324248473 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0230427893114 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0324115563764 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220708230241 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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