Crime is spreading like a modern day cancer, despite every country's attempt to suppress it. Even more disturbing fact is that the rate of youth crimes are increasing day by day. Experts are pointing out different reasons behind this scenario. I would say there are some key areas should need more attention to tackle this issue.
Firstly, poverty is the main ingredient which is adding fire to this problem, almost 30% of world's population is living under dreadful conditions. Youths comes from such backgrounds see illegal activities as a better and easy way to become rich, because of their early childhood experience, they are desperate to make some money one way or another. Secondly, unemployment is also playing a vital role in forcing youngsters in to unlawful activities. Nowadays most of the people are well educated, but they are unable to find a proper job because of the lack of opportunities. Last but not least, the use of drugs and addictive substances are presently very common among youths, this also lead them to criminal activities when they are under the influence of such addictives.
To tackle all these the authorities should play a vital role. Governments should provide adequate support to the poor people and help them to earn a living. Moreover state should invest their money on industries to create enough job opportunities to carter the needs of the young generations. Furthermore, strict rules and regulations should be imposed on the law breakers especially on people dealing with illegal substances. Furthermore authorities can set rehabilitation centers to help the people come out of their addiction.
To conclude, regimes and societies should work together to reduce the spread of youth crimes and it's effects for a better tomorrow.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
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Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...people dealing with illegal substances. Furthermore authorities can set rehabilitation cent...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...people dealing with illegal substances. Furthermore authorities can set rehabilitation cent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17361111111 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80437784687 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652777777778 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.832122431 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0824230859997 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0263090596514 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486274894497 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0571060455375 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482007909727 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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