Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some peole, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give our own opinion.
Today, economic development plays an important roles in our life. Many governments believe that it should be the most important goal. But some others argue that it is not the most important thing. There are other progress are equally important. In my opinion, I agree with those who believe that other measures of progress are just as important.
There are reasons why economic growth is seem as a foundamental goal for countries. Firstly, an economic development is results in job creation, a high level of employment and better salaries for all citizens. Secondly, economic progress ensures that more money for citizens and governments. For example, peoples can have money to rise satisfaction like travelling, buying many expensive brands... And governments can spend money on infrastructure and public services such as transport network, education system.. So the governments put the economic progress to the top list.
However, I would argue that various other forms of progress are just as significant as the economic factors mentioned above. In particular, we should consider the areas of healthy system, social justice, human rights, equality and domocracy itself. A country does not have a completed system is not a completed country, even if it has a lot of money. In this modern society, more and more people realize that money is not the important thing in the world, and it does not mean anything while they think health, happiness are more important than it.
In conclusion, from the point of my view, I believe that the success of a nation could be measure by looking at the health, well-being and happiness of its residents. Therefore, the governments should put other types of progress to the important place as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'role'?
Suggestion: role
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'seemed'.
Suggestion: seemed
...here are reasons why economic growth is seem as a foundamental goal for countries. F...
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Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...h as transport network, education system.. So the governments put the economic pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in particular, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11971830986 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80545208417 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570422535211 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9781397694 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5294117647 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7058823529 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88235294118 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365208406988 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117401292821 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077409147976 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20429518625 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088998085234 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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