Thanks to the cheap air fares by low cost airlines and the promotions by the travel agencies. Nowadays, travelling around the world is not a lifelong dream to the poor but an achievable reality to them. With just small amount of budgets, people are able to explore the world. However, there is a controversial fact-Should the visitors follow the local customs and behaviours when visiting other countries?Or should the host countries welcome cultural differences?
It is an undeniable fact that foreign visitors should abide by the local customs and behaviours as it maintains peace as well a...
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Sentence: If there is any visitor go against the local cultures due to their irrespect, chaos would happen and local people would get offended as well.
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Sentence: That is why government spend over millions in the students cultural exchange programmes every year to promote unity.
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