Dear Sir,
This is to bring under your notice that I am highly dissappointment by wrong commitments of delivering products on time.
My smart phone is not functioning and needs a immediate replacement. With this intention, I placed an order for Samsung J7 on your website Considering the urgency and convincing offers of next day delivery on your website. However, its been a week now and still I've not received the product.
The main motive of this quick decision of buying a new smart phone was to avoid any miscommunication and damages to my business acitivites in way of being detached from my customers who stays at geographically distint places. Hence getting an immediate replacement is crucial.
On this event, I could not wait anymore and I've already made alternate arrangements for other smart phone. I would suggest to cancel my order and be cautious in mentioning offers. This will be helpful in retaining your loyal customers.
Yous faithful,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...mart phone is not functioning and needs a immediate replacement. With this intent...
^
Line 5, column 263, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
... However, its been a week now and still Ive not received the product. The main ...
^^^
Line 7, column 227, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...stays at geographically distint places. Hence getting an immediate replacement is cru...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 45, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...his event, I could not wait anymore and Ive already made alternate arrangements for...
^^^
Line 9, column 116, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest canceling', 'suggest cancelling'.
Suggestion: suggest canceling; suggest cancelling
...ngements for other smart phone. I would suggest to cancel my order and be cautious in mentioning ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... your loyal customers. Yous faithful, XYZ
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, still, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10625 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01956510735 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.70625 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5030433977 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0873052725156 0.216113520407 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0342083518842 0.0766984524023 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342962180957 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0501282605596 0.12726935374 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286755178619 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.