Dear Sir,
This is to bring your notice that I am highly disappointment by wrong commitments of delivering products on time.
My smartphone is not functioning and needs an immediate replacement. With this intention, I placed an order for Samsung J7 on your website Considering the urgency and convincing offers of next day delivery on your website. However, it been a week now and still, I've not received the product.
The main motive of this quick decision of buying a new smartphone was to avoid any miscommunication and damages to my business activities in way of being detached from my customers who stay at geographically distant places. Hence getting an immediate replacement is crucial.
On this event, I could not wait anymore and I've already made alternate arrangements for another smartphone. I would suggest to cancel my order and be cautious about mentioning offers. This will be helpful in retaining your loyal customers.
Yous faithful,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 263, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
... However, it been a week now and still, Ive not received the product. The main ...
^^^
Line 7, column 225, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... stay at geographically distant places. Hence getting an immediate replacement is cru...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 45, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...his event, I could not wait anymore and Ive already made alternate arrangements for...
^^^
Line 9, column 117, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest canceling', 'suggest cancelling'.
Suggestion: suggest canceling; suggest cancelling
...gements for another smartphone. I would suggest to cancel my order and be cautious about mentioni...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... your loyal customers. Yous faithful, XYZ
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, still, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24358974359 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.120182019 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.717948717949 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5318494302 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0961688607256 0.216113520407 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373311553945 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348720786788 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.053991049844 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334945466628 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.