You recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English-Speaking friend. In your letter
- Explain why you changed jobs
-Describe tour new job
-tellhim/her your other news
Hello John,
Firstly, I would like to congratulate you for buying a new home. You will be happy to know that I got an excellent job opportunity at one of the company where I always aspired to be. Now, I work as a Sales Engineers at Tata Motors.
You would be aware about the recent acquisition of my previous company, Honda motors by XYZ Company which is an American Conglomorate. Because of this event the top management of the new owners of the company decided to shut the plants in India. Hence my job role became redundent. This called for dismissal of all the employees.
My present job at Tata Motors is very intresting and challenging. I handle a team of 10 Executives. This new job has provided me growth in terms of monetary benefits as well as responsibilities.
I am sure you would have heard about me getting married next month with my best friend Lera. I will write to you again with all the details regards to my wedding.
Looking forward to hear from you about your wellbeing.
Love
Sarthi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...pany which is an American Conglomorate. Because of this event the top management of the...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ny decided to shut the plants in India. Hence my job role became redundent. This call...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...end Lera. I will write to you again with all the details regards to my wedding. ...
^^
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...gards to my wedding. Looking forward to hear from you about your wellbeing. Love ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, look, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63186813187 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7209787569 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1120602289 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.8461538462 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219059396997 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637584692296 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429899276596 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118262744997 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025497112698 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.