You recently started work in a new company.Write a letter to an English-Speaking friend. In your letter- Explain why you changed jobs-Describe tour new job-tellhim/her your other news

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You recently started work in a new company.

Write a letter to an English-Speaking friend. In your letter

- Explain why you changed jobs

-Describe tour new job

-tellhim/her your other news

Dear Robin,

It has been so long since i wrote something for you. Anyway, I have a good news for you. I am selected in MNC multinational company in IT sector.

I have successfully completed 7 years in previous company, called Tc devps. Besides, after putting these much effort and hard work I could not seeing my future over there as that company is providing limited service and technology and they are not willing to extend it. I always been endeavour to learn new technology and development. Due to this reason, I left that job for career development.

I am fortunate with my new job. It is a multinational Service company. Many branches have been established in Canada, Australia ans USA. This company is providing a special training course for new latest technology on which they are working on. It is 5 floor company with huge amenities provided such as playground, swimming pool, party floor and all. I am so excited that I will be learning new programming language initially as I will learn new language and implement in given project.

Also I am getting angaged next month.My mother is going to call you for invitation. I am expecting you in this function.Also I am home before my joining date. I am wondering if we can meet up and have lunch together. Hope see you soon.

Lots of love,

Nidhi jayani

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Robin, It has been so long since i wrote someth...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ear Robin, It has been so long since i wrote something for you. Anyway, I have...
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Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good news'.
Suggestion: good news
...wrote something for you. Anyway, I have a good news for you. I am selected in MNC multinati...
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Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...MNC multinational company in IT sector. I have successfully completed 7 years in...
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Line 7, column 144, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'see'
Suggestion: see
...e much effort and hard work I could not seeing my future over there as that company is...
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Line 7, column 208, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ere as that company is providing limited service and technology and they are not ...
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Line 7, column 274, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'been'.
Suggestion: been always
...nd they are not willing to extend it. I always been endeavour to learn new technology and d...
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...I left that job for career development. I am fortunate with my new job. It is a ...
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...ol, party floor and all. I am so excited that I will be learning new programming ...
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...anguage and implement in given project. Also I am getting angaged next month.My ...
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Suggestion: Also,
... and implement in given project. Also I am getting angaged next month.My moth...
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...on. I am expecting you in this function.Also I am home before my joining date. I am ...
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Suggestion: Also,
...on. I am expecting you in this function.Also I am home before my joining date. I am ...
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Line 17, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ther. Hope see you soon. Lots of love, Nidhi jayani
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, besides, if, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1100.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7619047619 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80451998724 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632034632035 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6691851091 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.1111111111 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8333333333 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150928349163 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501431026799 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407958757332 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914311260639 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230556763778 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.44 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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