Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The way a person dress reflects his/her characters.
All people have taught do not judge a person by exterior factors, like appearance, height and dresses. It is undeniable that the first impression which is mainly from one’s look is of great importance. So, there is a question: can the ways people dresses reflects their characters? According to my perspective and observation, some characters can actually reveal by clothes.
First of all, whether a person is loyal to disciplines and laws can see from their clothes. As we all know, it is accustomed for people to wear certain clothes under some special circumstances. Students, for instance, are required to wear school uniforms on campus. We can consider those who are reluctant to conform to this rules and choose to dress their own fancy clothes as rule-breakers. They are probably unwilling to following commands and rules and would like to have the courage to break the unsatisfied situation. Thus, their rebel characters show up from the way they dress.
Secondly, dressing styles can tell altitudes about most everything from the person. There are plenty of thoughts and ideas about clothes from a person which are relevant to other things. If a person like casual clothes, wearing T-shirt, jeans and sneakers, he may be easy-going and carefree. By contrast, a person who always dresses up nice in the suit, he possibly is ambitious and workaholic. If he even wears leather shoes on weekends, he might have no time to relax and refresh himself. Only under huge pressure and anxiety can one dress like that all day. That is to say, dressing styles are imperative to judge a person.
In addition, people who are crazy about fashionable clothing and like spending time dressing may be narcissistic. On campus or in workplaces, some people can change their outfits every day and all are in the latest trend. Most of them highly care about their looks. So it is better for others not to judge their appearance and clothes too much but to compliment. By analyzing the information, we can better know others people’s interesting and have a chance to better along well with others.
In conclusion, people’s characters can truly expose by the way the dress. We can use this method to gain a great impression on others, as well as guess the characters of others. However, we should keep in minds that never draw a conclusion about a person only by their appearances.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 321, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, by the way, first of all, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1996.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97755610973 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78171027925 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526184538653 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.2224786488 48.9658058833 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.84 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.04 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.96 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131310666994 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428536726913 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436445184963 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794094900418 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316513387751 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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