It is usually foolish to get married before completing your studies and getting established in a good job. Do you agree or disagree?
Marriage is one of the key decisions in one`s life. The timing of the marriage is equally important. Some people argue that is not a good idea to get married before having a stable job and getting settled. I consummately accord with the notion and this essay will justify my perspective about getting married only after getting settled.
First of all, financial stability is the key requirement for getting into a committed relationship and raising a family. Students have usually no fixed source of income and majority of them are dependent on their parents or rely on their temporary part-time jobs. Having a family under these circumstances results in an extra stress and directly impacts the performance of students. They can neither concentrate on their academics nor on their family life and mostly spoil both.
It can be argued that having a family life release you from stress and can refresh you after having a hectic day at school. This argument, however, is not substantiated by the demographic data collected by myriads of surveys which clearly show that most of the students lose focus if they get married and start raising a family. Studies show that these students either perform significantly worse in academics or leave the studies in the middle of their course.
Keeping in view the aforementioned arguments, it can be rightly concluded that it is far better to stay focused during studies and think about marriage only when one is having a strong source of income and is established in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tudies in the middle of their course. Keeping in view the aforementioned argum...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01181102362 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71806701091 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582677165354 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.605877228 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.083333333 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.25397266985 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199920953762 0.242375264174 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691767631027 0.0925447433944 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890875775395 0.071462118173 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115409791262 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824667789708 0.0609392437508 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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