Some people believe that TV is a useful invention. To what extent you agree with the statement. Give your opinion and explain with the observations and examples from your personal experience.
In this era of electronic media, television has become a necessary part of every home. Some people believe that TV performs a positive role in the society whereas others differ and claim that watching TV is a wastage of time. In my opinion, TV is a useful invention like other inventions, provided a balance is kept between the time spent in front of the TV and other activities.
TV provides healthy entertainment for free time. Sports channels are a good source of entertainment whereas news channels enhance our knowledge about current affairs and play a vital role in shaping our opinion about ongoing global issues. It is a common observation that many families enjoy their dinner while watching their favorite TV shows. TV, therefore, is one of the major sources to spend quality time with family and friends.
On the other hand, it is also argued that people, especially kids, spend an inordinate amount of time in front of the tv and miss their commitments. Particularly, TV is a major source of a digression from studies for students and they get poor grades in exams. This, however, can be mitigated by having a stringent control by the parents and by regulating their daily routine. Positive entertainment can refresh the kids to be more focused if controlled by parents appropriately.
In conclusion, TV is a positive invention and can contribute to developing a well-entertained and well-informed society. A balance of time consumed for watching tv is definitely required as the excess of everything is bad.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03149606299 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00646172063 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586614173228 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2078575008 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3076923077 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123112554519 0.242375264174 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436515220298 0.0925447433944 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397502687326 0.071462118173 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724765357396 0.151781067708 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371328996319 0.0609392437508 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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