Do you think successful people are influenced by the environment where they grew up? Please provide an example to support your view.
Every successful person has a great story, and some of the mysteries belong to the environment. I agree with this statement that region gives a lot of contribution to victorious life. The below essay will discuss all the contentions and lead to a suitable conclusion.
To the begin with, a variety of reasons can be offered to explain why I am in favour of this. Firstly, the human acquires an abundance of knowledge from their friends and families. This information encourages them for their bright future. For instance, if anyone belongs to doctors family, then they will try to become the doctor. Secondly, the discipline and adequate play an enormous character in achievement which can learn from the environment.
However, on the other hand, as every coin has flip sides, this matter has some diametrically opposite views. There are other schools of thoughts who thinks the own capability is much more pivotal than the environment. There are many examples of successful persons who belong to the rural background, but they achieve their goal with flying colours. Apart from this, self-dedication encourages to an individual for getting the victory. No matter where they belong.
To put it into the nutshell, as I have established my viewpoints, I find the support from the domain is very crucial for triumph life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...uccessful person has a great story, and some of the mysteries belong to the environment. I ...
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Line 2, column 4, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... and lead to a suitable conclusion. To the begin with, a variety of reasons can be offer...
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Line 2, column 274, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'doctor'.
Suggestion: doctor
...ure. For instance, if anyone belongs to doctors family, then they will try to become th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, apart from, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1104.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06422018349 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85080579468 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655963302752 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5303061207 50.4703680194 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.8571428571 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5714285714 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.099918967206 0.242375264174 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0339832346665 0.0925447433944 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03615798584 0.071462118173 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0533917307576 0.151781067708 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362322103153 0.0609392437508 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 12.6369458128 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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