Some people think it is not necessary for adults to receive education in class. Self-study is a good way for them to study more effectively. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent decades, a highly controversial issue has arisen regarding the education without the classes. Some people are of the belief that being in classes is not regarded as essential while others believe that self-study has further benefits. I firmly concur with the opinion that adults do not require to educate at classes because of saving time and costs.
To begin with, adults cannot spend their time for being in classes. From my personal experience, a qualitative analysis was conducted by an eminent sociologist to explore further busy with works and life. Subsequently, final results revealed a highly complex relationship between transportation and jobs even though homework and time efficiency should be taken into consideration. Thus, people can be fully informed about sufficient evidence of a causal link between spending further time in their research.
Furthermore, going to classes incur expenses and alleviate the time of working and engenders costs. For instance, quantitative research was carried out at the Melbourne University concerning prices and salaries. Indeed, if scientific research is inextricably linked to augmenting costs, the preliminary findings are closely allied with economies and money. Hence, its likely outcomes would be significantly correlated with reducing the costs.
To recapitulate, according to the preceding discussion, I am inclined to believe that it is not regarded as essential to being in classes because it augments the costs and requires further dollars. Moreover, not only should national institutions develop strategies, but also they should formulate them to instruct them at home with self-study.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, while, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.652 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99926657702 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1498611674 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.692307692 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 2.91625615764 343% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134179173252 0.242375264174 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482866948561 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052974826743 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0852301432971 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626282229305 0.0609392437508 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 53.1260098522 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 11.5310837438 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.32886699507 125% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 55.0591133005 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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