It has been suggest that universities should require numbers of male as same as female students in every subject. In my opinion, both men and women deserve to have the same educational opportunities. However, I do not agree with the idea of accepting equal proportion between genders in each course.
In the one hand, having the same ratio of man and women in every subject is basically unrealistic. The rates of each gender applicants depend on what majority it is. For instance, information technology is the course that requires students with high quantitative skill, data analysed skill and computer skill, which is forte of most men. In fact, there is a numerous number of guys participate in this subject in comparison with that of women. If the universities accepted to fill information technology with balancing each gender, this course would be definitely incomplete.
Apart from practical concerns expressed above, I also believe that it would be unfair to base admission to university course on gender. University should select the best and suitable candidates instead of choosing through sex. In this way, the same opportunities are given to each applicant, and they would make their best effort to enter their dream course. Otherwise, there would be a part of candidates who was afraid of failure because they are pessimistic about becoming the fruitful half. This would lead to a problem while applicants ’s ability have reached enough qualifications, they still do not register to course.
In conclusion, I disagree with this unrealistic idea and I hope that people who gave this opinion would concern about the demerits outlined above.
- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness aredecreasing.What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them? 61
- These days, cell (mobile) phones and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially.Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? 89
- The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth. 87
- Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). 80
- In some countries, some high school leavers are choosing to work or travel for a period of time before going to university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of those school leavers' decision. Give your own opinion. 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'suggested'.
Suggestion: suggested
It has been suggest that universities should require number...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22388059701 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83508435054 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60447761194 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1499990604 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204191043263 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074066693746 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0989734230867 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132293751419 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120430864101 0.056905535591 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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