Write a letter to a friend to ask for his/her help to collect money for a charity organization. The letter needs to cover the following details.
- why do you want to collect money for the charity organization?
- Ask your friend to help
- explain in detail how your friend can help.
Dear Kevin,
I hope you are fine and this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter to want your assistance to collect money for a charity event that going to take place in my college next month. As you know that I am one of the members of the "Help-a-child" charity organization in my territory. As an active member, the group is planning to hold a program the next program.
The charity group is would want to give their service and offer it to the street children of Voronezh City. We are a non-government organization which obtains our funds vitally from business and individual donations. Hence, if we have not found enough our resources, we ask other organizations and people who could help us make this program possible.
As my good friend, I am asking for your assistance in raising money to suffice the budget out charity is aiming to collect. I know you have been the president of the musicians club in your school. Perhaps, I may suggest if it will be possible to hold a mini-concert in the weekend, This would require a lot of your time but I believe this totally would be successful.
Please Call me as soon as you received this letter so that we can talk about more of the plans and if you have a bright idea for us to work on.
Thank you in advance for your help.
All the Best .
Gokhan.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...n advance for your help. All the Best . Gokhan.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1100.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 242.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54545454545 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8039341602 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578512396694 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0180916943 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6153846154 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325850051673 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10995554409 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107610711384 0.0603063233224 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184411114367 0.12726935374 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071049418255 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.