The internet has transformed lives and economies but it is turning the world into a global village. Soon everybody will think and behave in the same way.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The internet is affecting our lives on daily basis whether it is our personal life or professional life. There has been an ever going argument about internet leading the society towards a society of thinking alike.

No one can deny the fact that internet has taken the center stage when it comes to globalization. Internet is affecting us in every aspect of the life from contacting with our loved ones to making official presentations we are relying on the internet in modern era. Global economy is also not exempted from the impact of the internet international trade has become very accessible due to it. Transactions are easily made over the internet for trades across the borders.This all is virtually impossible without the internet.

However more and more use of the internet is turning this world into a global village. In nearest future it is possible that people from diffrent parts of the world may think alike. This is happening due to the lack of original ideas, people are copying ideas from different parts of the world and serving them to their local audience. For example,film industry is copying other nations stories and making movies in their own languages out of that watching that kimd of stuff for continue period of time will affect the mindset of the people. With people consuming more or less same content all over the world there is a big possibility that people across the globe think and behave identically in nearest future.

To conclude, it can be said that people are relying overly on the internet and they are losing their individualness. Local flavours are fading away and global festivals are celebrated

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 470, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
... internet for trades across the borders.This all is virtually impossible without the...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...lly impossible without the internet. However more and more use of the internet is tu...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 348, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , film
...hem to their local audience. For example,film industry is copying other nations stori...
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Line 5, column 490, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...atching that kimd of stuff for continue period of time will affect the mindset of the people. ...
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Line 5, column 696, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the nearest'.
Suggestion: in the nearest
... the globe think and behave identically in nearest future. To conclude, it can be said ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, for example, more or less

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95306859206 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61538331799 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56678700361 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9219066757 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.538461538 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20170592926 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695421870108 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555928507741 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10138578258 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486165936855 0.056905535591 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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