There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? is the traditional music of s country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Its the need of person to relax himself, after a massive work burden. There are several types of relaxing sources, taking a short sleeping, having tea or coffee, watching movies, and other entertainments depending on everyone's mood, but people like to use music are more than any other entertainment sources. Musics are of different types e.g. traditional, classic, pop, modern etc. Although, nowadays modern music is more common in youngsters, but there are still a huge of number of people prefer to traditional music.
Traditional music is more common in old people whom are more traditional and more cultural, having more patriotism for their country, culture and traditions. As the globalizing changes are happening very faster, causing our new generation getting away from their traditional music and also from other traditional education.
It can be denied, that nowadays traditional music is no more important by arguing, that development rate is letting people to be more advanced, more modernized through familiarizing international standards, customs, laws which is more common in many developing countries like China, UAE, KSA, and other developing countries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
Its the need of person to relax himself, af...
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Line 1, column 320, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... other entertainment sources. Musics are of different types e.g. traditional, cla...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, e.g., if, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 180.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54444444444 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95051784532 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.6176917126 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.571428571 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3796407252 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181757279174 0.084324248473 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864028685309 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252686672738 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435700483697 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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