Music is the reflection of human culture, there are manifold of music in the contemporary world and this essay is going to substantiate the need of music and the significance of traditional music to international music.
There are plenty of styles in music based on situation, language and emotions. We need music as a common medium to communicate with people and nature.To illustrate, there is no language to communicate between a new born baby and its mother, lullaby is a song - combination of music and words, sung by mothers to console, to pamper her offspring.
On the one hand, traditional music are the song of history about the local place, its not only a sound but the evidence of our ancestors' way of life. The instruments used would tell us stories about our grate grand parents' past life. As an instance, there are evidences of instruments made from sea-snail's shell, this implies that there were fishermen living in and around the area where the fossils instruments have been excavated.
On the other hand, international music has its own place among the people, though it is international to some, it is as same as the traditional to the occupants of the respective country. Though preference has to be given to traditional music, there is no harm in learning about the other country music as well. For example, through the Jazz and Pop music we gain knowledge on language, culture and people's life style.
In a nutshell, Music is a reflection of Life and culture, it can be traditional or international but the emotion it creates among the people is the same.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, as to, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87777777778 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87323817501 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52962962963 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.1838465556 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.7 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40762826683 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171781555975 0.084324248473 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134396431238 0.0667982634062 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251414898443 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147322822235 0.056905535591 259% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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