The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Balmer Island Gazette.
"On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation, the population increases to 100,000 during the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the town council of Balmer Island should limit the number of mopeds rented by the island's moped rental companies from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season. By limiting the number of rentals, the town council will attain the 50 percent annual reduction in moped accidents that was achieved last year on the neighboring island of Seaville, when Seaville's town council enforced similar limits on moped rentals."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
In the letter to the editor of the Balmer Island Gazette, It is said that the moped are the most popular mode of transportation in Balmer Island and during summer months the population increases which leads to more accidents. To reduce these the town council of Balmer Island should reduce the number of moped rented by the Island's moped rental companies. Also, it states that the accident would reduce by 50 percent by decreasing the renting of moped. There are many assumption that the author had taken while deriving the above conclusion which are without any proof or evidences.
Firstly, the author of this letter states that to reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrian the renting of moped should be reduced. What is the premise for this assumption? How can one conclude that the accident occurs only due to the pedestrians and mopeds? Is there no other reason for accident? Also if the accidents are majorly from from moped and pedestrian than how can one deduce that the reason for this is only the moped riders may be the pedestrian are walking on the road alloted for moped. Also there may be the reason that the road are small so the people and moped riders have accidents. There must be the plenty of reasons that is leading to the accidents of people and moped riders. It cannot be concluded that reducing renting of moped will decrease in the accident.
Secondly, the author also states that if the number of the moped renting is limited than the accident will reduce to 50 percent. There arises a question, how can one deduce the number of accident will reduce to half. the author had not provided any evidences for deriving such number. Even the total number of accident happening at this time and what would be the situation after applying author's assumption is not given. The author had failed in giving the proofs for these things. He/she had not given any data that leads to any evidences that may prove his/ger point.
Thirdly, it is said that as the nearby Island town Seaville has applied same policy and got good result. Balmer should also apply. These itself makes no point. What is the proof that as seaville had achieved result Balmer will also achieve. There are plenty of reason like the roads as suggested before, the people needs of walking on road or the traffic regulation etc which makes this assumption nebulous.
At the end, it should be concluded that there is no meaning in doing the same as other town for reducing of accidents. The council of Balmer Islands should find reason's for the accident and try to rectify the problem that arises that only the accidents will reduce
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
argument 1 -- OK
argument 2 -- not OK. we don't question how they got 50% annual reduction, we may question like: maybe there are other reasons to get 50% annual reduction; and it was achieved last year, maybe this year it is different; ...
argument 3 -- OK
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 462 350
No. of Characters: 2141 1500
No. of Different Words: 184 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.636 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.634 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.203 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 159 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 85 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 56 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.856 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.417 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.305 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.503 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.104 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
In the letter to the editor of the Balme...
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Line 1, column 468, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun assumption seems to be countable; consider using: 'many assumptions'.
Suggestion: many assumptions
...reasing the renting of moped. There are many assumption that the author had taken while derivin...
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Line 1, column 473, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'assumptions'?
Suggestion: assumptions
...ng the renting of moped. There are many assumption that the author had taken while derivin...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... are without any proof or evidences. Firstly, the author of this letter state...
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Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... Is there no other reason for accident? Also if the accidents are majorly from from ...
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Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: from
...dent? Also if the accidents are majorly from from moped and pedestrian than how can one d...
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Line 3, column 527, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... walking on the road alloted for moped. Also there may be the reason that the road a...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...moped will decrease in the accident. Secondly, the author also states that if...
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Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...number of accident will reduce to half. the author had not provided any evidences f...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dences that may prove his/ger point. Thirdly, it is said that as the nearby I...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hich makes this assumption nebulous. At the end, it should be concluded that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.6327345309 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.9520958084 154% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 13.6137724551 147% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 28.8173652695 118% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 55.5748502994 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2190.0 2260.96107784 97% => OK
No of words: 460.0 441.139720559 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76086956522 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27289444307 2.78398813304 82% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 204.123752495 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.39347826087 0.468620217663 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 684.0 705.55239521 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 19.7664670659 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.4598989081 57.8364921388 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6 119.503703932 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 23.324526521 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.96 5.70786347227 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.25449101796 209% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 6.88822355289 218% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252557368624 0.218282227539 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777643099969 0.0743258471296 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.096614798823 0.0701772020484 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160926799683 0.128457276422 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116085212308 0.0628817314937 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 14.3799401198 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.3550499002 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.197005988 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.5979740519 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.32208582834 91% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 98.500998004 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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