In this ever growing and modernizing world of today, the use of technology to simplify different kinds of problems has become the spine of the society. It is crucial to be using technology in order to survive in this rat race. This will enhance the ability of humans to think for themselves.
The world is evolving and so do the techniques to survive should. Now-a-days, all walks of life be it medical sciences, research, agriculture, transport or anything involves intricate and mandatory use of technologies which simplifies life to great extent. Although, the lifestyle is simplified because of extensive use of technology, it doesn't mean that the ability of humans to think for themselves will reduce. Huge amount of effort and intelligence goes into developing these technologies and further optimizing them. As new things evolve , the need for developing something better grows which fuels the brain cells for improvising more and more. There is no full stop to the scope of developing things to simply problems instead it keeps on broadening the horizon even more. One development is simply a step below the next one coming.
Moreover, with the increasing use of technology to solve complex problems a lot of time is saved in comparison to what it used to take for a normal human being. This in term gives a surge in the time capacities of people which they can now use for for doing some other work and channelize their energies for other things which they couldn't previously do. This might result in influx of more new ideas which definitely will occupy the human brains for furthest development.
On the other hand, the ability of humans to think might deteriorates in cases where individuals are completely dependent on the use of technology to solve their problems and cater to their needs. These people might become indolent and stop using the physical and mental spheres of their body which might be alarming.
Therefore, we can say that though technology has simplified the work of every tom, dick and harry in this era, we cannot merely say that the ability of humans to think for themselves will deteriorate because of this. The correct use and application of these technologies requires some mental effort and it is completely dependent on a particular individual how he or she wishes to make use of all the technologies available. It is upto the people whether they wish to evolve more or be stuck at what is given to them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2040.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 415.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9156626506 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73881534015 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493975903614 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 654.3 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4262081574 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.333333333 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0555555556 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248033503353 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826421540388 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588715241748 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145032959482 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040967855835 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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