Nowadays, communication is become most powerful skill of human because of modern society. Without communication people will become less powerful and less intelligent than other animals and humans can be destroy. Due to that I disagree with the statement ' It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make a new friends ' for several reasons.
First of all, you can meet with a lot of fabulous people by making a new friends and they will be build a new world for you. You could make a friend with people who have a different culture, personality and also live in another environment. Imagine that, there are friends from Thailand and Mongolia. In Thailand, there is not snow during winter however in Mongolia, Mongolians are bored from snow and this would be environment difference. About culture, in some counties ' v ' is refer victory however other countries it is refer another meaning.
Secondly, communicate with people who are different types of personality, culture, religion will improve your communication skill for a lot of ways. For example, if your friend's mood is usually angry you learn how to talk with your angry friend. Thus when you meet with angry stranger, you do not have a difficulty with talk to them. It can be a important life experience than any other knowledge such as basic science knowledge.
Thirdly or finally, you can get a lot of information from different types of people by making new friends. If you make a friend from another country, you can get a fresh information of his or her country that you could not find on internet, magazines or other resources. Moreover, if you have a different interest with your friend, you can feel another feeling from music, movie or something else that are loved by your friend. I think it is most important benefit of making new friends.
In conclusion, keep your old friends is also important but making a new friends is more beneficial. Because of that, I disagree with the statement for the reasons mentioned previously.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8804664723 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71671625699 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475218658892 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8256766504 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0555555556 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336362283335 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123784233055 0.076458572812 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111792638963 0.0737576698707 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227460372504 0.150856017488 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807364812069 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.