Artificially intelligent robots are increasingly taking human jobs. Some people believe that eventually all work will be done by robots, while others believe that there is a limit to the tasks that robots can perform.Choose which poition you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details of your own experiences, observations or reading.
Human employment is continuously decreasing as a result of artificially intelligent robots(General-paraphrase). While some people think that human labour will eventually become completely obsolete, others maintain that robots will never be able to perform certain jobs(Two sides). This essay will discuss why robots will eventually be able to perform any function and will therefore replace all human jobs(your Opinion).
At some point in the near future, artificial intelligence will supersede human intelligence and outperform us on every possible task (Side1). Machines are becoming increasingly intelligent at an extremely rapid pace(Why-Reason). Every few years, for example, computer capacity doubles in power(For example). As a result of this exponential growth, there is no reason why computers won't eventually replace humans in all jobs (Conclude side1).
(Side 2)Despite the inevitability of human labour replacement, some people don't think that computers will ever reach certain levels of intellect and consciousness to rival humans in some jobs.(How/Why-REason) These people are unaware of the rate at which computers are becoming intelligent. (Example) It is just a matter of time before computers can program themselves. (Conclude) Even the most complex human jobs such as medicine and education will be mechanised.
Artificial intelligence is rapidly taking over the human workforce. In my opinion, it is only a matter of time before robots completely replace all human jobs no matter the skill or sophistication.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, while, for example, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74666666667 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40757036647 2.71678728327 125% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586666666667 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1406646405 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.75 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318127509387 0.242375264174 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114402636967 0.0925447433944 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728357024443 0.071462118173 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190445940543 0.151781067708 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703585663443 0.0609392437508 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 53.1260098522 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 10.9458128079 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.07 11.5310837438 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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