Some people believe laws change human behavior. Do you agree with it?
Law, in general, is written rules and regulations that are meant for people in a society. Law was created, and intended, to guide and shape the behaviors of humankind. In my opinion, law affects people’s behavior either directly or indirectly. I believe the punishment or reward associated with the system of law causes people to change their behavior.
To begin with, laws are developed to discipline the society. To maintain such a control, rules are formulated to prevent all offences and punishments for every social and personal transgression, so that crimes once committed are not repeated again. An acute system like this is much needed to thwart crimes. Moreover, the consequences of obeying or disobeying laws impact people in their everyday lives. Thereby, law influences how people behave with others in a society. Breaking the law would mean trouble. This fear of consequences makes people behave better. For example, earlier ‘male homosexual acts’ were a crime in many nations but now people are accepting gay members as it has made legal by the law. Another example is that the law ensures women’s rights makes the women feel equal and safe in a society thus bringing a positive change in their behavior.
Laws are the strongest tools to maintain propriety in a well-functioning democracy. Without them, a society may become chaotic. There are many countries in the world where the 'rule of the gun' is the norm. For instance, terrorist attacks are rife by the group Boko Haram in Nigeria. Also, there is the case of Somalia, which is the world epicenter of sea-piracy attacks. Had these countries stricter law enforcement, the people of these regions wouldn't be involved in such barbaric activities. On the other hand, there are countries such as Singapore, where citizens are indoctrinated with a respect for the laws since a very young age. The people there have an inherent respect for the existing regulations. Also, the fine for law-breaking is so severe, that out of fear, denizens wouldn't risk circumventing or subverting them.
In my opinion, there are many ways through which laws affect the behavior of a person. In our day to day life, we as a citizen of a country are supposed to follow its laws which are meant for our betterment. Following the law in our daily life induces it in people’s habit which in turn affects behavior of a person. For instance, driving a car is accompanied by the rules that are defined in a state’s law. To avoid punishment or fine, it becomes a person’s habit to fasten seat belt or follow speed limit or stop when traffic light signal is red. This shows that the fear of punishment stops people from going against the law.
In conclusion, as a result of facing possible penalties, people are forced to behave responsibly and do well to other and society. In this sense, laws do influences people behavior significantly. The law constantly changes our behavior and perception toward many things in our daily lives consciously and unconsciously.
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...nforcement, the people of these regions wouldnt be involved in such barbaric activities...
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...s so severe, that out of fear, denizens wouldnt risk circumventing or subverting them. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 10.5418719212 256% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 8.36945812808 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 31.9359605911 200% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2544.0 1207.87684729 211% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 504.0 242.827586207 208% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04761904762 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73813722054 3.92707691288 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88535181599 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 139.433497537 188% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519841269841 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 797.4 379.143842365 210% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 7.0 1.56157635468 448% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 3.65517241379 328% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 12.6551724138 245% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9407826058 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.064516129 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2580645161 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45161290323 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 2.75862068966 399% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 2.91625615764 411% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304709333278 0.242375264174 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889027615249 0.0925447433944 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795557488655 0.071462118173 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207306246982 0.151781067708 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890315206412 0.0609392437508 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 12.6369458128 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 55.0591133005 234% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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