Nowadays people leave there home country and settle and look for jobs in outside. They want to enjoy their future in other nation by adopted all rules and regulations also facilities provided by them. In this essay, i will discuss the merits and demerits of living and working in a foreign country also give my opinion.
To begin with, people have opportunity to explore their ideas and develop something new as they have wide range of technical support. Next, they receive enough amount of money from their workplace and save money for their future which is more than their home country. After this, folks are start earing at young age by which they learn to live independently and manage things in their life also give financial support to their family. Moreover, health facilities are best as compared to own country for instance, if anyone has problem with his health they can get immediate response from health care. Likewise, students have chance to work as well as study and earn money for their livelihood.
On the other hand, demerits can not be ignored. The first and foremost is the long time for settlement as at initial stage it is difficult to find best job in related field of study. Second, the economic growth of their native nation is not develop as more people migrate to other countries. Third, leave their family for long period of time and live alone in new environment.
To conclude, it is good for living and working in other nation as they gave lot of ways to create new ideas and give best way of life also learn new skills and use of technology.
- Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country 77
- As the world becomes technologically advanced, computer are replacing more and more job. Describe some job positions that may be lost because of computers and discuss at least one problem that may result. 73
- As the world becomes technologically advanced computer are replacing more and more job Describe some job positions that may be lost because of computers and discuss at least one problem that may result 74
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Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'give the best'.
Suggestion: give the best
...ave lot of ways to create new ideas and give best way of life also learn new skills and u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, likewise, look, moreover, second, so, third, well, for instance, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71119133574 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28275914763 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563176895307 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2897608915 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.384615385 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128763688138 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052995913216 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904912302553 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957047059363 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788464904899 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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