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Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country?
It is a glaring fact that people leave there home country and settle and look for jobs in outside. hopefully, there are advantages as well as disadvantages in living a foreign country. I will justify my points below.
To begin with, the people who are working in a foreign country are able to get a good income and save for their future years. Intially from the very young age he or she can build up a very strong financial source. It helps to settle in the foreign country without discomfort. To illustrate, a person who is getting a job in a small scale factory in his home country, will get ...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Hopefully
...nd settle and look for jobs in outside. hopefully, there are advantages as well as disad...
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...ok for jobs in outside. hopefully, there are advantages as well as disadvantages ...
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...small scale factory in his home country, will get more salary in a foreign countr...
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Suggestion: So
...l get more salary in a foreign country. so with a span of years he can be rich fro...
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Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
... be a matured and more independent. It make an individual to be self dependented an...
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...ative people in his country. However, there are also impacts of living and wor...
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...uences on the individuals. And moreover, there are cases where killing and crimin...
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...mportant to be migrate to other country, inorder, to survive. It will make us stu...
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...nt than we are now, despite the fact of, our failures in home country. Moreover, ...
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... our failures in home country. Moreover, it will make us think to work harder and...
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...ountry is a good way to settle in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, sort of, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6303630363 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61737604157 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49504950495 0.561755894193 88% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0872207019 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.8421052632 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9473684211 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94736842105 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304768511927 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105611244793 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12272561819 0.0667982634062 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183712882412 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502754396003 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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