Some people think that governments should knock out old buildings and make way for new buildings.Do you agree or disagree.?
Buildings represents the real status of any country. Presently, old buildings are thought to be a no longer of that important. Therefore, it should be blow up and provide space for new buildings asserted by a sheer persentage of people. Here I would like to discord with given statement that authority should beef the old buildings.
To begin with, there are many solid reasons supporting the significance of old buildings. Initially, presence of old buildings plays a phenomenal role to represent the cultural heritage of any country. To be specific, every old piece of construction i...
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
Need to put more content in the negative side. while remove some content from the positive side.
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 327 350
No. of Characters: 1624 1500
No. of Different Words: 198 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.252 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.966 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.75 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 119 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 90 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 68 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 50 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.35 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.261 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.55 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.335 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.571 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.082 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
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Buildings represents the real status of any country. Presentl...
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...e real status of any country. Presently, old buildings are thought to be a no lon...
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... no longer of that important. Therefore, it should be blow up and provide space f...
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...cord with given statement that authority should beef the old buildings. To be...
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...h given statement that authority should beef the old buildings. To begin with...
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...ignificance of old buildings. Initially, presence of old buildings plays a pheno...
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...s. Initially, presence of old buildings plays a phenomenal role to represent th...
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...gs plays a phenomenal role to represent the cultural heritage of any country. ...
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...enomenal role to represent the cultural heritage of any country. To be specific...
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...eritage of any country. To be specific, every old piece of construction is a si...
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...ecific, every old piece of construction is a silent Story teller of his history...
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...piece of construction is a silent Story teller of his history. It reveals its e...
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...l features such as , customs, tradition, eating habits, weapons used in that tim...
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... habits, weapons used in that time etc. The monument of Tajmehal in India is th...
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... used in that time etc. The monument of Tajmehal in India is the live example qu...
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...example quoted in this regard. Moreover, construction pattern and deliberate usa...
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... in this regard. Moreover, construction pattern and deliberate usage of costly i...
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...erate usage of costly items like stones, marbles in old buildings provoke modern ...
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...m to adopt the basic tact. Secondly, old buildings are fruitful to boost up t...
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...ny nation. Peopks from various countries come to see the astonishing features of ...
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...atures of any prominent buildings. Thus, it can be beneficial to allure tourists....
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...eficial to allure tourists. As a result, old buildings are lucrative to earn extr...
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...me for their city state and nation. Further emphasizing on my point of view, old b...
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...Further emphasizing on my point of view, old buildings can be used as educational...
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...gs can be used as educational resources.For instance, the historical sites are good...
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...tes are good example or illustration for historians and students to learn about t...
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...learn about the human past. However, old buildings have many merits but it h...
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... human past. However, old buildings have many merits but it has some demerit...
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...ave many merits but it has some demerits also. Some old buildings have no positi...
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...but it has some demerits also. Some old buildings have no positive sides. Thence...
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...uildings have no positive sides. Thence, alteration of that buildings can provide...
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...rovide more job opportunities to massive number of people. Apart from it, that ...
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...ssive number of people. Apart from it, that space can be used for new streams w...
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...an explore new ideas. In conclusion, preservation of old buildings is essenti...
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...s own value. These are the indispensable part of any nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17484662577 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87094892432 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59509202454 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6068479419 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3333333333 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5238095238 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 39.0 5.01903807615 777% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243773966366 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723558942561 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487147933409 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129431483465 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528939931581 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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